SOLSC #23: Where I’m from Poem

I was away for most of the weekend, and I don’t think the comments I made from my ipad posted.  Sorry!  I’m back home on my laptop so I will catch up.

This poetry idea is from Allan Wolf’s Immersed in Verse.  The students I worked with last week and I are working on our poems.  Here’s my draft:

Where I’m From

 

I am from Larry and Leslie

I am from cross cultures – a Midwesterner transplanted in South Florida via

Virginia, Indiana, Iowa, and Germany; an Army brat.

I am from cement, sand, and the smell of salt water.

From sunburns and fish scales.

I am from Umbrella trees and Bougainvillea.

 

I am from an aunt, uncle, grandparents, and great grandparents.

From meat and potatoes and empanadas

From pecan pie and Girl Scout cookies.

I’m from book-of-the-month club and visits to the library. 

From Clean your room! and You’ve got til the count of three!

 

I’m from smoke, crashing pins, and snack bar food.

From competition – in academics and athletics. 

From 80s music that got progressively louder as the decade passed, exchanging melodies for metal,

Michael Jackson to Metallica.

 

I am from divorced parents who remarried . . .each other. 

They always expected I would go to college, but didn’t apply pressure.

I am from support, encouragement, and freedom.

I am from trust, respect, and an appreciation of independence.

 

All of these roots have opened countless doors, availed me of endless opportunities. 

 

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25 thoughts on “SOLSC #23: Where I’m from Poem

  1. Ramona

    Love these lines:
    “From meat and potatoes and empanadas
    From pecan pie and Girl Scout cookies.”
    I think I’m ready to try my own “where I’m from” poem.

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    1. readerlee Post author

      Thanks, Ramona! I think you’ll find that it’s fun. I look forward to hearing what the students did with it. They enjoyed the brainstorming part.

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  2. Jaana

    I LOVE where i am from poems!! I did mine the first year I sliced. Your last line is very meaningful! And the lines about music were fun!

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  3. arjeha

    I have always enjoyed I am from poems. They give us a chance to reflect on what made us who we are and they are also a great way for others to get to know us.

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    1. readerlee Post author

      They are. And I great way for us to get to know different things about our students. It’s sort of a special challenge writing when you know people who have known you for many, many years are reading. Can I get something in there that they don’t know?

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  4. Tara Smith

    I am from support, encouragement, and freedom.
    I am from trust, respect, and an appreciation of independence.
    – Great lines! We do these poems at the end of our sixth grade year, it’s a format that makes you think, right?!

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  5. jen b.

    Where you are from sounds much more exciting than where I am from… until I really started thinking about it and wondering if I could make where I am from sound just as intriguing! Well done – you captivated my attention, piqued my curiosity, and motivated me to write. Isn’t that a success as a writer!?!?

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  6. elsie

    It is interesting to reflect on what our experience are and how they formed us to be who we are. I love doing this with kids at the beginning of the year, it let’s me know a bit more about each. Your poem leave the reader wondering how some of these things go together.

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    1. readerlee Post author

      You’re right, Elsie, this would be great at the beginning of the year. I look forward to sharing the idea, and maybe even finding a colleague who wants me to come in and teach.

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  7. aggiekesler

    I love how you took us on a journey through your life with this poem! 😉 It’s difficult to write one of these poems. I’ve tried, and it took many, many drafts. It’s difficult to decide what goes and what stays. I love your line “from meat and potatoes and empanadas” because it shows your various cultures that have influenced your life. Here’s mine from last year’s SOL challenge:
    http://aggiekesler.wordpress.com/2013/03/29/where-im-from-sol-29/

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    1. readerlee Post author

      Thanks for your feedback, Jennifer, and for sharing your poem. I love how descriptive it is, but the last line is definitely my favorite. Quite a contrast to the rest of the poem, and yet, it’s the life you’re leading! I was also happy to read that you worked on it for months. I definitely have not done that, but this morning I thought, the poem doesn’t really reflect the influence of my dad’s side of the family. I’m ready to rewrite! I guess I’ve got a year to revise and I can post again next year. 🙂

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      1. aggiekesler

        Yeah, I worked on it and made several lists and drafts in my poetry notebook before I published it. I still think it deserves some looking back and revising. 🙂 Good luck on your revisions!

  8. Julie Johnson

    I love Where I’m From Poems. I wrote my first one when I was in the summer institute with the Columbus Area Writing Project. It’s a wonderful way to think about what’s important to who you are and at the same time for people to get to know you.

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